Many people don't know about where the food comes from and how to the processing. They never go too fine the factory how to processing of foods. I didn’t know factory farm is different between family farms before I watched The Meatrix movies. I am sad to know the true about meat packing plant.
The Meatrix movies used the animal's point of view to talk about factory farm and meat packing plant situation. Those factory farms put animals living in small places that they cannot freely. In such a confined space, animals cannot breathe fresh air. Over time, animals' resistance to drop a lot. They in order to enhance Animals immunity, they added to animal feed with antibiotics. Furthermore, they feed the baby cow in blood instead of milk. After they antibiotic overuse, a lot of cow were mad cow disease. They even wanted to avoid the chickens' fighting, so they cruel to cut off chicken's beaks.
It is not difficult to imagine a fast food nation like the U.S. thousands of tons of beef was consumed every year. Factory farm gradually replace family farm because of factory farm feed animals speed faster than family farm. Under the high-speed consumer environment, unscrupulous traders began to look for ways to artificially accelerate the growth of animals. For example, they use many antibiotics to expedite animals’ growth.
However, the factory farm want the everything is fast, so the meat packing become the most dangerous work in the nation. They use the low selling price to attract fast food companies and people to buy. They just for the pursuit of efficiency without responsible. People who eat those foods will suffer from diseases. This is a shameless of irresponsible business practices for the society and the masses. How many people eat those foods as a result of obesity and suffering chronic diseases! The government because of the fast-food company pay for huge tax policy each year that without the introduction of policies to regulate the industry.
In my opinion, in order to our heath we should support the family farm and don’t buy the fast food. This is the good way for us to reduce the factory farms. In a word, in order to our health and living environment of animals. We should clearly understand the source of production before purchasing food products. Try to buy organic food.
Hello, I'm the other class's person :) Yes, unless the declining of profits, we need to support the family farm! You organized really well about the Meatrix! It's glad to read your blog! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteafter i saw your blogger, i have more clear about Meatrix. i agree with your opinion of don't buy fast food. this is really good for health.
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ReplyDeleteyes, that is good, I agree with that. we have to support family farmers more, because the most important thing is family farmers are health for all people in the world. so, I agree with you opinion. but the only thing you have to work on is write more about how to support the family farmers.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good post,I agree that it is important in order to our health we should support the family farm. It has a good reflection.
ReplyDeletewow, this is very interesting ! I haven't seen the Meatrix movie YET xD. I learn a lot from your blog post. Never again will I eat fast food, yuck! Thanks for sharing your ideas :D
ReplyDeleteyea we need to support family farms and get healthy life!
ReplyDeletei agree with your opinion. we should support families farms. It's good for our health. also, it's good for animals.
ReplyDeleteYour posting is really good and I totally agree with ur thinking.
ReplyDeleteThis is good post. we need to support family farms and get healthy life consume organic food. we should put a stop to the meatrix.
ReplyDeleteyou have really nice summary and reflection and i agree with you.we should defiantly support the family farm.
ReplyDeleteIf you did not watch some documentaries about factory farms yet, I recommend you to see it. Although we just saw themeatrix animation about factory farms in class, it is enough to make us disgusting. That is not all. ;)
ReplyDeleteI agree with your thought that many people don't know where the food coming from.And factory farm cause some dieases in our body and is unhealthy and some people prefer to eat it.And your grammar is pretty good.
ReplyDeleteYour essay and structure are very good. I can easily follow your description and get to the point. There are some grammar mistakes, but overall, your essay is pretty good.
ReplyDeleteHi, I am from Dr Smith's class, you have a good essay, but you are missing a thesis statement. Be careful about your grammar.
ReplyDeleteAccording to my understanding your essay has sufficient support and it was satifactory for me. My feedback to you is that for the future try to focus a little more in your thesis statement in the beginning of the sentence, just to show the reader what topic is going to be developed. But I want to encourage you to let you know that your essay was great. I strongly agree when you stated that to take care of our health we should support the family farm and don’t buy fast food.
ReplyDeleteI did not see a complete summary. Although you did have a few sentences on it here and there. The overall point is good. And your conclusion is pretty good.
ReplyDeleteHello, I am surprise you are in ESl 099, you have good writing skills, and you could be in my class in ENG 099.There is one important part of your essay that i believe is completely off; your thesis statement is not stated in the introduction, however the rest of the essay is great and it makes a sense to the topic.
ReplyDeleteThank you .It is a very good assey but,I think your opinion or your claim has to be by the end of your first paragraphe.Then you have to put reasons why.In general it is so organized assey .You used a lot of new words which is good.I think you have to work on grammer.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you, and his is a very interesting easy. You clear express your opinion with the strong reason.
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ReplyDeleteyour essay gives exact examples how it really works in today's reality. I like the way you organized the your response on this difficult to talk about topic. Thing is in it more people will write about it than maybe more will understand what is the real problem of nowadays farms.